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:iconbirdewilliams:
You continually blow me out of the water with the exquisite attention to detail that you give to the hair in all your pieces. I think this is the best one yet, as far as hair is concerned - every single little strand! I love how you make even the tiny wisps look beautiful.

I also really like the necklace - it's shiny and quite detailed, and the shadows cast on her chest are very well-done.

The only thing I would critique - and I only say this because I know that you strive to make your work as perfect as possible - is that her right forearm looks a little... short, like it's not long enough. I think it's the highlights at the bottom of the arm that are doing it - the wrist looks a little funky as well. But foreshortening is very difficult, and in the long run, I think you pulled it off pretty well.

Impact gets a 5 because it looks like she's staring off the page and into my soul! You've captured the true spirit of this woman, and this is a very striking piece.
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:iconlion83:
Thank you my friend! I agree with you on most parts.

About the arm. In my defense it doesn't look that way in real life. To much light on that end when I took the photo. The shade on the arm is pretty much black in real life. But I see your point!

Thanks

/Per

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:iconbirdewilliams:
You're welcome! ^^

I understand, it's difficult to get an angle like that 100% correct. I honestly think it doesn't impair the drawing at all; it's a wonderful piece!

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